Why Should I Poem by shiny shine

Why Should I



How do you expect us to forgive you
after all the pain that you have put us through?
I am glad that our friendship is over
now i see truly how far we had gone
I now know all the lies you told and pain spread
Now we can clearly see all the pain you put us throguh
you pretended that you cared
because you were scared
you are ever trying to make us feel bad
but we don't care even if you are sad
you tell me it is just a stupid fight over a boy
it may be in your opinon
but we know the truth
you found the wrong thing to push us over the edge
all the anger released from us
leaving you behind in the dust
at first you were making me feel guilty and it worked
but now i look back and think of all the harm you did and don't feel bad
now you hangout with some of my friends. What is up with that?
now you have to take mine? you tell them not to talk to me.
you tell me that my current friends are not true friends
that they just use me. and were only firneds because of you.
if so why are we still friends
Y SHOULD I BELIEVE U?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 08 November 2008

Wow this poem is really deep.....i felt like intense the whole time that i was reading this lol awesome job Tyease

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Silver Day 23 March 2010

good release of your feelings, and good explanation of an friendship ending tragically.

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DELETED NOW 04 March 2010

Now that one is a little better...it totally smells like skunk x2 when people try to make you feel bad and guilty...don't let them get to you it's just part of their game. I speak to everyone. Tolerance is essential. My fAVorite lines are: you pretended that you cared because you were scared

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Cat Tiger 24 July 2009

A poem of a 17 year old with 12 year old mistakes, but the rhythm is good. You have a gift that will improve if you study.

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A Lifetime Of Fame 19 July 2009

This is a deep poem, I love it. It brings out anger, hurt, and passion, all at the same time keeping calm and sophisticated. A wonderful piece of art. GOD bless you.

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Kevin Fisher 24 April 2009

interesting I like this strong message keep it up

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