Why Don'T You..? Poem by Neela Nath Das

Why Don'T You..?

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For long you don't step
In this world of imagination.
It seems you are vanished,
In the milky way of space.
Far from poem, love and me.
What makes you to say us,
Good bye? I find no reply!
There's the blank-sheet,
You may fill it with adjectives,
Before my name, may be they
Worse, but, come back to
Your true self, my intellectual,
Part, I'll care a little,
If I'm hurt, yet, I want
My wings to fly in the sky,
As a sea-gull over the,
The wide, wide sea...
Why don't you regain,
Faith on your godly-self,
Why don't you write,
A poem breaking the bar?
I lost you, my altar ego,
My art, my poetic heart!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(It seems I won't write anymore.This sense made me write this poem.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 31 July 2012

We cannot conceal despair/ But 'ere wings of hopes flutter again! ! ! Good poem! ! !

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Babatunde Aremu 03 August 2012

This is wonderful. keep the pen screaming

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

why don't you? ... you do......really well........thats a self check........

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Kasia Fedyk 01 August 2012

Nila, you are amazing I find myself in the same state and essence as you, I can float in the world of imagination where my spirit soars high and free ego no longer felt and no longer a part of me. Just the same. Incredible write Nila. Thank you!

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Indranil Bhaduri 01 August 2012

Superb Nilakshi.. Just loved it.. keep writing! ! !

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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Good job dear friend. Keep on.

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