Why, Does This Happen To Me? Poem by Silent Suicide

Why, Does This Happen To Me?



The scarlet syrup seeps from the gaping hole in my body.
I can't stop it even though I want to.
I love her but she doesn't even notice me.
The shining sliver flash of the blade is a friendly companion now.






(I know it's not long or great but.... oh well)

Thursday, April 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem because I'm depressed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shian Daley 30 April 2014

Wow soo deep.. it touched me.

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Life is a challenge to oneself and in every moment of life one must be conscious and optimistic.

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Colleen Courtney 24 April 2014

Although it does seem sometimes as if love is capable of killing us, I promise you it's not worth it! ! ! Nicely written. Nice imagery.

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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

What a great testimony to the brilliance of the mental mind and great imagery involved. Well done Hope all get well soon Its my honour if you read some of my poems I am waiting

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