Why Does She Still Want To Hurt Me Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Why Does She Still Want To Hurt Me



Cloths change old young
heart full tree decoyed
to hope
discriminateless aim
she covers my blood
with other
smaller trees
drilling through heart beat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lt Feitosa 08 April 2009

Great Lines Friend! 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Catrina Heart 08 April 2009

wrenching the throbbing heart.........nicely done!

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Inveterating write, I.I.P.....and it is! FjR '09

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Nicely written Nice job

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Jacob Courtney 08 April 2009

very well done. I must say this is short but with a deeper meaning than many. Makes ya want to ponder.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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