Why Am I Poem by sanitra porter

Why Am I



why am i sitting here thinking of you, but i cant help myself im so in love with you. you on my mind 24/7, why am i so in love. i have been hurt so many times before i hope you are not the same. i want someone to hold me, kiss me, and tell me that they are here to stay and that everything's gonna be ok. why am i sittin here thinking of you, i go crazy when i cant call or see you. can you teach me how to love you, i promise i will. one thing i really want you to know is that i cant live without you. why am i sittin here thinking you, YOU ARE SO REAL! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Dylan Gaudreault 06 October 2011

i feel ya cuz i can very well relate great poem

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Unwritten Soul 09 October 2011

Well expressive from your feeling, Sanitra. Love is a surprised gift box, sometimes when you open it you will cheer for the heart inside, sometimes when you open it the box is just a silly joke that hurt most..So there outside you can find many boxes of love and be careful to choose which box they can offer you...May you find a good one :)) Unwritten SOul

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Brian Skyers 01 November 2011

Hi. read this. Nice poem, just needed to structure differently. keep writing.

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(De Va) 01 November 2011

passion flows from this, and so does mystery

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Renu Kakkar 29 October 2011

nice poem i like the feel of it...can you put it into verse form..at present it is in prose reading like a passage

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Misty Tumlinson 26 October 2011

This one as well has lot of passion and feeling put into it.

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Dave Walker 14 October 2011

A great poem about love. When you find the right person Love is the best thing in the world.

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