Why? Poem by Angelic Warrior

Why?

Rating: 5.0


So cold, I can not breath

So tired, I want to give in

So sad, I don't know what to say

Why does life crumble before my eyes?

The consistency of water,
I can't pick it back up

Doors always shoved in my face,
I feel hollow

Cold and Dark

Lonely and Forlorn

Why?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

no moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee. smile!

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Dr Yogesh Sharma 05 June 2009

it is a sad reality of life but you have high and bright future. dr.yogesh sharma

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David Bedome 27 May 2009

I completly understand what you felt in this poem.. Why? is the question.. I hope you'll find the answer.

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why..which softly and touchingly said in this angelic poem..why because all the warriors feel so lonely in this lonely universe..they feel so as their search for the purity continue and their sadness increase with each black heart and day they face..well expressed

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isabelle Cote 24 May 2009

angelic...hmm this is odd this user name reminds me of my friend, emmy.... kindof odd seeing as how u use the EXACT SAME vocabulary as her.... anyhoo, nice poem, lovely: P

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