Bellaina Bella Hernandez

Rookie (4-17-1994 / California)

Why? - Poem by Bellaina Bella Hernandez

Why do i feel this way when im around you
why is it that when im around you, i dont know what to do
why cant i tear out my heart now
why cant i love a life without any emotion
why do i want to live a life without any affection
why is it that i want to die without anyone at my side
why dont you want me to die, instead you want me to be by your side
why do you care so much for me, its like you want us to be
why is it i too want to be with you

I love you
and i feel like
You love me too
But WHY? ! ? ! ? !

(sorry for repetition of why)

6-4-2011


Comments about Why? by Bellaina Bella Hernandez

  • Rookie Cameron Penrose (11/20/2011 1:50:00 PM)

    why is it that i want to die without anyone at my side
    why dont you want me to die, instead you want me to be by your side
    -these are my favorite lines contrasting the difference between mortal and immortal desires! The repetition of 'why' didn't bother me much because the questions had substance! Nicely composed! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 67 Points Crimson Love (11/20/2011 1:45:00 PM)

    Often questions need to be asked, but its not often we get a response, we have to figure the answers out ourselves, but hope we answer correctly, this poem was brilliant. Great job! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 19, 2011



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