Whose Blame Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Whose Blame

Rating: 5.0


O little rain-drops!
Did you mix my tears with your rhymes?
That may be why my love can't see my eye
The final result is, now I have to cry!

O tender breeze!
Did you carry anti-love virus?
It killed my love's warm, heartily act
Can you bring happy dreams back?

O great rainbow!
Were you sleepy at that moment?
Because of you, I lost my confidence
Be dutiful again to report angel Venus!

O angry Lord!
Did you share me a wistful curse?
With your disciples, Thunders, hunting experts
They tried to seek my renew heart!

O permanent sky!
You wear a dark, stormy robe
Clouds of worry miss their roads
Now, I just stand alone by an oak! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 14 September 2012

Whose blame...this is so great. you know, you have painted a great work with your unique imaginary here. well done.

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Rain ... 10 September 2012

O little rain-drops! Did you mix my tears with your rhymes? That may be why my love can't see my eye The final result is, now I have to cry! ........................................................................... beautiful poem, , , , , , , , , and i am sure you are hiding something behind these words...don't worry dear, , your happy dreams will soon drizzle on you

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Aung Si 10 September 2012

Wow! Really good sister.But what sort of message do u wanna share? Anyway, style and verses are pretty.I enjoy this.

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