Who Took My Breath Away........... Poem by Kavya .

Who Took My Breath Away...........

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I owe my success to you
I am indebted on you,

On things lost I have no repentance
You are the reason for my existence,

My words of solitude
Is interpreted well only by you,

Let me hold my breath handful
As I do not want to lose you,

Your gentle and soft touch
Takes my breath away,

Why did the breath I exhaled
took me away! ! ! ! far away...........


HINDI TRANSLATION

Meri saans tum ho
Mera vajood tum ho,

Jo beet gaya uski nahi muje parva
Mera aaj tum ho,

Meri baatein tanhayi mein
Sun lete ho tum gehrayion mein,

Keh du meri saanson se 'tham jao zara'
Apni jaan ke saath thoda aur 'jee lu zara',

Tumhare sparsh bi hain shaamil
Meri saanso ko rokne mein,

Kyu le gayi muje saath yeh
Meri lautne wali saanse!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 15 January 2014

Good, nice expressions

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Dinesan Madathil 16 January 2014

A strong and highly charged poem.. The translation can be later verified in GOOGLE TRANSLATOR whenever you attempt the same.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 January 2014

Beautiful poem Kavya....Beautiful flow of words so pleasant to read. Even the hindi translation is very good one. Loved reading both.

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Ameya Deshpande 28 January 2014

a very nice poem! like it very much

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Valerie Dohren 20 January 2014

Love that penultimate couplet too - deliciously romantic.

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Om Chawla 17 January 2014

Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. The hindi version is equally authentic and does not sound as a translation of original thoughts.

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Valsa George 16 January 2014

Your gentle and soft touch Takes my breath away, Such romantic fervency! May you never lose his supportand let him be around to understand and interpret your moods, Kavya! Enjoyed! !

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