Who I Am! Poem by Nayyab Younas Khan

Who I Am!

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Who I am, I asked myself
without any clue
I see things appearing, vanishing, deceiving me from what's true

Have I been looking at me from people's eyes till now
I have to see with my own eyes but to begin how?

Am I that what you hear melody of grief
Or wind I am that you feel spreading some relief

Am I that who is standing at the shore with emptiness
Or the whole ocean I am, with all it's glory and fulfilness

Am I soil down to earth or sky I am above so high
So many things I do witness, still not a clue, I wonder why?

Who I Am!
Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: individuality,life,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 09 November 2017

Beautiful poem.finely crafted.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2017

Wow... such a brilliant write, Nayyab.... a highest 10++++😘😘😘

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Nosheen Irfan 16 November 2017

A lovely poem. Indeed the purpose of our existence is self-discovery. We all are trying to find our true identity in a vast varied world. Well penned.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 November 2017

Who can answer this question? Nobody knows who he is, perhaps we are what we think. A thoughtful poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 November 2017

First of all we have to recognise ourself and then we can be able to recognise our Creator. Very intelligent questioning is present in your beautiful poem but there should also be some clue leading towards their answers, I think. Anyhow I like your curiosity too much. Thanks for sharing.

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Chuy Amante 09 November 2017

What are you not? Be all of it without a you. That's when you appear keep feeling and writing A+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2017

Such a brilliant write, Nayyab... a highest 10++++😘😘😘

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