Rosmin Elsa Mohan

Rookie - 47 Points (21st December / New Delhi)

Who Am I? - Poem by Rosmin Elsa Mohan

I thought I was a son
My life, when had begun
I thought I was the one
When I knew I’d but won
I thought I was so rich
With my dreams forever in pitch
I thought I was so poor
When she left; behind that door

I thought I was in here
The soul though was out there

I thought I could realize
What I was. To emphasize
What I was in what I am
But then the stars seemed so bright
I could not just face the light
I ran forth.
In time
The past seemed to outrun me
I think I spoke to shadows.
For somewhere out in utter space
Was someone who knew my ways?
The past in me to embalm
Those lines on my right palm
The myth that blinded the human race
In a mirror to see that face

To see who I was
Who I was
Who I am
Who am I?


Comments about Who Am I? by Rosmin Elsa Mohan

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (3/28/2012 7:52:00 PM)

    Excellent! Quite a powerful and well crafted poem that clearly gives you away! A reservoir of rich imagery and great rhymes the bring melody to this thought provoking write! You poetic talent is so obvious! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! If you have the time, I would like you to read and I hope you enjoy my poem also with the same title: Who Am I? God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (1/30/2012 11:43:00 PM)

    The past in me to embalm
    Those lines on my right palm
    The myth that blinded the human race
    In a mirror to see that face.............
    these lines tell the whole story; unbelievable! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, January 30, 2012


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