Who? Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Who?

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Who is there peeping on the branches
waiting for your naive soul
since your childhood

feathers of mustard seed
tweeting for you

it has the yellow orbits of the birds

in dusk or dawn glimmering

with opaques eyes

OH!

it is not a crow

trying to steal your breath!

~not good not evil~

just what you picked and dreamed
and
because was ground up together with the yellow seed
has one salvation

has there ~sitting over the gold cage~
hidden
a crowned soul

until has no more voice
until has no more soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 28 August 2013

the freedom of the bird song (i assume a canary) whether on a branch or in a cage can only be heard when in ear shot. in this poem i believe the song represents the dreams of freedom. the listener being in the cage and the bird outside the window. well done

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Heather Wilkins 09 September 2013

oh is it not a crow trying to steal your breath good thoughts

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 September 2013

Beautiful words..Sitting over the gold cage hidden a crowned soul....Who is there peeping...Fantastic write with deep meaning..beautifully portrayed.. Loved it...

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Ramesh Rai 29 August 2013

a bright brilliant n beautiful natural sight overwhelm my sub conscious mind.

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Sallam Yassin 28 August 2013

pure your flow pure your lines and glow like burning stars of true

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 August 2013

opaque eyes will never permit to pass light.

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