White Poem Poem by Marieta Maglas

White Poem

Rating: 5.0


Your teeth have a painful shine,
Your smile is sad
In the absence of words.

You become aware of deeper parts of yourself
You become aware of the much greater wound in your soul...

Where only whites descend for love,
Making us realize that,
Only through love and pain, together,
We can become eternal and
We are aware of asceticism.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 19 May 2009

Together is the keyword

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Karen Morales 30 June 2009

i for one love this poem. the way you write its lovely :)

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Angelica Ayman 01 July 2009

you are so sweet, , and this poem is the coolest ur really talented....

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 September 2009

Only through love and pain, together, -> sharing sweet&bitter nice. a lovely poem 10 for the sharing

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Obinna Eruchie 16 October 2009

'Your eyes become transparent / To the wound of the soul, / Where only white descend for love...' it is touching.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 August 2010

‘We are able to become eternal and /We are able of asceticism. ~ Indeed asceticism ~ refraining from worldly pleasures ‘Platonic Love’…into different plane…escalation…rhapsodic… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 30 April 2010

Better keep myself silent for utterance. Blow your whiteness silently. Apoet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2010

Making us realize that, Only through love and pain, together, We are able to become eternal and We are able of asceticism........ya it is eternal feeling and we all long for it..it is white that is pure and real....10 read mine....from theday one...teacher's woe

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 December 2009

Nice poem with perfect ending and apt title. Few lines are composed brilliantly. Good one.

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Eyan Desir 19 November 2009

Well I am thinking about taking out a tooth... Ouch...your poem was poetic and written well

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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