Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,936 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

White Poem - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Your teeth have a painful shine,
Your smile is sad
In the absence of words.

You become aware of deeper parts of yourself
You become aware of the much greater wound in your soul...

Where only white descend for love,
Making us realize that,
Only through love and pain, together,
We are able to become eternal and
We are able of asceticism.

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Comments about White Poem by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (8/4/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    ‘We are able to become eternal and /We are able of asceticism. ~ Indeed asceticism ~ refraining from worldly pleasures ‘Platonic Love’…into different plane…escalation…rhapsodic… Thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,396 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (4/30/2010 12:56:00 AM)

    Better keep myself silent for utterance. Blow your whiteness silently.




    Apoet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 6:45:00 PM)

    Making us realize that,
    Only through love and pain, together,
    We are able to become eternal and
    We are able of asceticism........ya it is eternal feeling and we all long for it..it is white that is pure and real....10

    read mine....from theday one...teacher's woe (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (12/1/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    Nice poem with perfect ending and apt title. Few lines are composed brilliantly. Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/19/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    Well I am thinking about taking out a tooth...
    Ouch...your poem was poetic and written well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (10/20/2009 7:05:00 PM)

    i quote:
    '' In the absence of words.
    Your eyes become transparent
    To the wound of the soul ''

    that is a very good expression..
    i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul..
    and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us..
    i ilke this poem so much..

    thanks4sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (10/20/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    i quote:
    '' In the absence of words.
    Your eyes become transparent
    To the wound of the soul ''

    that is a very good expression..
    i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul..
    and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us..
    i ilke this poem so much..

    thanks4sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/16/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    'Your eyes become transparent / To the wound of the soul, / Where only white descend for love...' it is touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/6/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    Only through love and pain, together, -> sharing sweet&bitter

    nice. a lovely poem

    10 for the sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Angelica Ayman (7/1/2009 7:30:00 PM)

    you are so sweet, , and this poem is the coolest ur really talented.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Morales (6/30/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    i for one love this poem.
    the way you write its lovely
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/19/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Together is the keyword (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013


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