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Marieta Maglas

Rookie - 638 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

White Poem


Your teeth have a painful shine,
Your smile is sad
In the absence of words.

You become aware of deeper parts of yourself
You become aware of the much greater wound in your soul...

Where only white descend for love,
Making us realize that,
Only through love and pain, together,
We are able to become eternal and
We are able of asceticism.

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Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

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  • Rookie - 35 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (8/4/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    ‘We are able to become eternal and /We are able of asceticism. ~ Indeed asceticism ~ refraining from worldly pleasures ‘Platonic Love’…into different plane…escalation…rhapsodic… Thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 6:45:00 PM)

    Making us realize that,
    Only through love and pain, together,
    We are able to become eternal and
    We are able of asceticism........ya it is eternal feeling and we all long for it..it is white that is pure and real....10

    read mine....from theday one...teacher's woe (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Eyan Desir (11/19/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    Well I am thinking about taking out a tooth...
    Ouch...your poem was poetic and written well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (10/20/2009 7:05:00 PM)

    i quote:
    '' In the absence of words.
    Your eyes become transparent
    To the wound of the soul ''

    that is a very good expression..
    i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul..
    and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us..
    i ilke this poem so much..

    thanks4sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (10/20/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    i quote:
    '' In the absence of words.
    Your eyes become transparent
    To the wound of the soul ''

    that is a very good expression..
    i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul..
    and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us..
    i ilke this poem so much..

    thanks4sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/16/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    'Your eyes become transparent / To the wound of the soul, / Where only white descend for love...' it is touching. (Report) Reply

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