White Hot Fire, Deep Blue Sea Poem by Bragg Adocio

White Hot Fire, Deep Blue Sea

Rating: 2.7


You are the only one who can burn me. I'm a pisces who plunged his heart to the bottom of the sea for protection. Only you have been able to reach me, scar me and heal me at the same time. CongratulAtions, you Are my lava in antartica, you are my hypothermiA. You are the white hot molten rock lit under me, and the danger that quickly subsides and gives me time to hide again. But, you always seem to find me, like ariel's tag At an under wAter volcano. 
I was Always afraid of an eruption, thAt one dAy you might just boil the water Around me. I was always afraid you would stop showing up, leave me to freeze under the sea.
I wAs foolish, because it doesn't matter. You are the only person who can do both at the same time. I gave you power over me, daughter of a diety's conception; Poseidon and Venus, water and war, still yet agitated, heal me than BREAK me! Kill me FAST, revive me, then SLOWLY! But I'm the one with the smoking gun! I'm the one, vulnerable one, the one who begs for a quiet night at home then hands his heart over to a dominatrix! I am Hot Fire, burning underwater, try to extinguish me! Ask the Greeks, YOU CANT! you can't unplug will-power and I am not the type to recant! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Black Bird 12 February 2010

Hmmm =] I like this one too I sense anger tho, it's one of those beautiful yet angry poems.

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Kari Alexander 10 February 2010

i love the rhythm and raw emotion in this piece, well done.

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