* * * Whispered Sweet... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Whispered Sweet...

Rating: 2.6


Snowfall, snowfall...
With white roses...

Snowfall, snowfall...
With white dreams...

Snowfall, snowfall...
The angel has arrived...

Snowfall, snowfall...
With white wings...

Snowfall... snowfall
silent song was bringing....


Snowfall, snowfall...
Silently he began to sing...

Christmas, christmas...
Whispered sweetly he...

Snowfall, snowfall....
White- roses falls on me...

18.XII.08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 18 December 2008

A beautiful piece Tsira, 10 regards Tom

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Alison Cassidy 21 December 2008

A crisply textured, elegant poem. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Costa Anakiev 16 May 2009

Dear Tsira, it's your 1st poem that I can call almost perfect (yes ALMOST) . And thank you for your comments on 'What do you wear? ' This iverhyck was written for my pupils nearly 6 years ago. By the way, will you read 'Thank you, Lilith'? Many of my friends laugh, but none of them say anything good about it (perhaps because all of them think that I blaspheme here) . Konstantin.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 06 May 2009

Snowfall snowfall Whisper sweet........lovely

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Andrew Blakemore 29 December 2008

Lovely words Tsira, white with roses, white with dreams. Happy new year, love, Andrew x

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Vinod Kumar 23 December 2008

I can imagine the Great Snowfall, Well written stanzas Thank you for sharing

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C T Heart 23 December 2008

White christmas for you Tsira, beautiful and elegant poem, written with grace.

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