Whisper And Sing Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Whisper And Sing

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I was no more poets
Yet talked a lot
Imagined natural objects
Tried to weave in good words

Friends used to criticize
As they were not familiarized
With my fancy and attachment
It was purely my sentiment

I wanted to praise beautiful things
Flowers, gardens were not new or something
It appealed me more in real sense
I used to rush to nature when felt tense

I used to see beautiful reflection
When moon was appear with action
Her silvery light amazed
I was at peace and not chased

Here no one was to pull legs
Night allowed snakes to move around
Yet there was no danger to feel
They were all out for food and not for kill

Anybody would whisper and sing
Such was quality of nature to bring
The peace was essential that world could not offer
I was at rest with complete calm and no more to suffer

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

I was no more poets Yet talked a lot

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Rajesh Thankappan 23 December 2014

Sometimes poets with their swaying imaginations appears to be an out of the earth species. Nice reading.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 21 December 2014

I used to see beautiful reflection When moon was appear with action Really beautiful poem with perfect presentation. This shines with vision and thought. Nicely penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

lovely imagery Amara ValaLess than a minute ago very well written. Comment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

I was no more poets Yet talked a lot

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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