While It Was Raining Poem by Daisy Pereira

While It Was Raining



Sky is ravaging
like a jealous lover
rummaging through the fallen leaves

huge rain drops fall and burst
the yesterdays griefs
Earth loves the lightning
which goes through the night
like a searing sword.

Sunday, November 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it is about a stormy night.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 31 January 2015

short, direct, intense and somewhat.. therapeutic.. a fine poem, Daisy

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Kee Thampi 02 November 2014

thunder made with a lightening rain

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