Which Fool Poem by Bonnie Collins

Which Fool

Rating: 5.0


The biggest fool of all was the one
who was left without the ablility to move
forward, and leave behind a bridge that
never was ment to cross

The lesser fool was the one who learned
how to build the bridge and secure the
gap to withold any storm it many encounter

I know which fool I was, do you? .........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 08 April 2009

I had to give this one a 10 before i even posted my comment. I know which fool i am, i think i have to start building myself some new bridges :) Thank you for sharing your talent with us Bonnie.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 October 2008

Don't be foolish, lass...you're nobody's fool...especially considering the above erudite words you have shared, here...Solid Write, Bonnie! ~ F j R ~ ((2008))

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Andrew Blakemore 23 October 2008

This one got me thinking a bit Bonnie. I have burned too many bridges in my life and it's to my regret. I think I should start building them again right away. A great poem Bonnie that carries a fine message. Love, Andrew x

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Bonnie Collins

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Middletown New York
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