Where Is This Going? Poem by Jinal Oswal

Where Is This Going?

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When I meet you, the stars come down and a smile spreads across my face
The moon lights me in grace

When you talk, the birds stop by listening to your melodious voice
Confusing it with a rhythm

When you hold me, the violin starts playing… tickling me
My eyes close as soon as I hear the music

If this is the so called paradise
Why my life is hell? ?




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 January 2013

Ah lovelife is tricky, i can relate to this somehow. A wondrful freeverse poem. Pls read mine too.

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