Where Day Unfolds Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Where Day Unfolds

Rating: 5.0


As a boy I often walked
Meadows brushed with summer’s gold
Beneath the slanting sun I sought
The twilight fields where day unfolds.

Where autumn chested robin sways
On cattail clumps ascending spire;
Who unimpressed by human ways
Yet summons sunset’s muted fire.

And scurrying, fervent footed mice
Beneath the brambled berry patch
With diligent scritch and urgent scratch
Pause, suddenly silent, as I pass by.

The night swift climbs the late day breeze
Staccato thrusts of wing and bone
Ascending arcs, Dadaelian’s ease
Icarus falls with haunting moan.

Yet finds again his skyward arc
On wrenching wing, intrepid heart.
And I outstretched upon the grass
Alone observe his aerial act.

And watch the final fiery spears
Of sunset gild the meadow blades.
The burnished pink to grayness fades
As Aphrodite’s star appears.

The tall pines lift their swaying boughs
To catch the final auburn shafts,
While twilight gathers herself below
The mouldering logs and tufts of grass.

And creeps along the rabbit trails
And through the brambled berry patch
To meet me on the dwindling path,
Paused, on the fading edge of day.

Hushed now, the robin and the lark,
As Venus lifts her wondrous light,
And I in the weight of the falling dark
Hear the night swift’s fading cry.

I oft recall those twilight walks
And wish that I could find again
The meadows brushed with summer’s gold
In the twilight fields where day unfolds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 19 February 2018

My friend....nature must bow before such a tribute! Stunning poetry in the truest sense of the word, twilight gathering herself, pausing on the fading edge of day, what a poem! !

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Seamus O Brian 19 February 2018

Bill, I am so pleased you found this one, as it is one of my favorites because this is a place that holds many wonderful memories. And I wrote this at a time when I actually had time to polish it. Thank you always for your gracious encouragement, Bill.

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Tan Pratonix 05 October 2016

Superb. I wish there was more such poetry on PoemHunter, but this site has been invaded by the Ninjuns (as I call them) . Memorable lines: Meadows brushed with summer’s gold...Where autumn chested robin sways On cattail clumps ascending spire; ....The night swift climbs the late day breeze Staccato thrusts of wing and bone.... And watch the final fiery spears Of sunset gild the meadow blades. The burnished pink to grayness fades As Aphrodite’s star appears. Small suggestion: suddenly silent, as I pass The additional 'by' seems to affect the rhythm of this beautiful poem. There's lots more. Beautiful memorable imagery.

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Lorraine Colon 07 July 2014

Beautiful poem. Excellent arrangement of words that create exquisite imagery. Loved every line

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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