Where Are You Going Anyway? Poem by Nat Z. Punx

Where Are You Going Anyway?

Rating: 4.5


i want a nudie suit
something simple
silk bell bottom pants
tight cut jacket
with pot leaf rhinestones
sing with a haunting lonesome whine
dry desert high plea
have the windfall existance
die where i feel peace
flash into the arid night sky
young charmed and charming
leave no one or nothing i touch
the same

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 02 July 2006

I don't think what you ask is too much Nat, your poetry certainly leaves a lasting impression and silk is the perfect nightwear imo. A little punctuationa and capitalisation would make this easier on the reader, I do realise a lot of poets don't don't bother with it anymore, but I'm an old fashioned girl! Smiling at you, Tai

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