When Your Dark Shadows Poem by Susmit Panda

When Your Dark Shadows

Rating: 4.8


When your dark shadows haunt and loom
My wits turn sound of Life's great fertility;
When your python-embrace turns me to doom
I torch my day's unpartable magnanimity;
Things that are beyond the notice of my eyes
Crawl through my mind with a touch of royalty,
Scents whose wings do not awaken my sighs
Are then imbibed with uttermost loyalty;
In your bleaching fire as shall my husks break
In your smiting fancy thus my sanity melts,
A curse teaches us boon, my sinews wake
To sinew in all when your fangs sting my belts
Like a dream bites blood; as you heighten my birth
Let it build, as you do, my Death, you some worth.

Friday, July 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: human nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susmit Panda 11 July 2014

When the dark shadows... this could've been better

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Valsa George 11 July 2014

When the dark shadows of Death like a python is about to strangle us, it is then that we think of the beauty of life.... that we wake up to its fertility and royalty....! I wonder if I have understood correctly....!

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Chuy Amante 11 July 2014

Very nice! Amazing details and choice of words! A+

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