When You Love Poem by Gordon D Wilkinson

When You Love

Rating: 5.0


When tears roll across your cheeks
This heart bleeds a little
As your eyes close in pain
It dies a little
If it detects your despair
Into two pieces, it breaks
Never to be whole whilst you’re afflicted
So smile a little more
Wipe away those tears
Give me your pain to bear
Let me carry your cross of despair
Only then can I too heal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 January 2016

Supeb..Let me carry your cross of despair Only then can I too heal

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Shashendra Amalshan 13 August 2009

This is very moving Gorden.. Hey remember when I first came here, you said, woman can make men look like headless chicken running every where blah! ! ! ! this is good..very touching and moving.. not like your fun and witty ones.. hey It is kinda incongruous when you write such one..... cheers shan

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Fiona Davidson 02 August 2009

I can relate to this one Gordon...beautiful heart breaking piece....Fi 10++++

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Fay Slimm 02 August 2009

A cry from the heart Gordon - - and tenderly written - -an appealing love poem - - 10 + + from Fay....

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