When You Look Back Poem by Emmanuel George Cefai

When You Look Back



When you look back
Old
Aged
Ageing
Man
When you look back
On life
Remember
That you have composed this
Verse
And spoke your heart
At will
Nonchalant
If the rest
Is sheer disaster on disaster
The vase into a thousand
Bits and pieces
Broken
Yet
There remains
Something that be
Not broken.

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 22 July 2014

This is a wonderful poem. It has qualities that I admire and look for in poetry, It is honest, no false airs, no self-deceptive pretense. It is unsentimental, which means it conveys true sentiment. It is completely candid and open-hearted. And, perhaps most importantly, it affirms our work as poets, acknowledging the truth of what we write and furthermore the lasting quality of that truth. I turned 67 this summer, and I needed a poem (which I have failed to write) to deal with it. Your poem has fulfilled that need. Many thanks! !

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