When You Feel Me Poem by sara wiliams

When You Feel Me

Rating: 5.0


I see the sun
shines in my hair
when your hands
is it's dress

I climb your happiness
and pass the lands
that make me cry
that make me cry

such a big lie
love once and once
such a big lie
happens just twice

love lives in me
I fly this time
over the clouds
of your deep love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 15 September 2007

I see the sun shines in my hair when your hands is it's dress.........................most beautiful imagery i am yet to find that carries with it with every thing implecit, thanks for sharing

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 September 2007

Well done, Sara...Mellifluous structure...i like the repetition inthe 2nd stanza...it compliments the serene tone you establish from the start-up... ~ FjR ~

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