When Will They Be Free. Poem by Hnt var
When Will They Be Free.
When life will unbound
so will they free themselves from the fear.
As might grows
so will they embrace it with the lust of greed.
The heavens will shut their doors
as death's appetite will grow for them.
Waiting for the message to arrive
yet not knowing it has flown all too soon.
Who will be there to defend them,
when they stand before the reality to where the light forever shines.
When will they be free, not in mind but in heart…
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4/18/2024 4:05:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very inspirational poem. My only suggestion would be to separate the lines differently, they way it's cut off in the sentences is a little confusing. For example, instead of; 'When life will unbound so will they free themselves from the fear.' maybe try; 'When life will unbound so will they free themselves from the fear.' It would just make it a little clearer. Just a suggestion. But over all I loved this poem, certainly keep writing.