When They Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

When They

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When they
Hard as nails, hearts like iron
Filled my sleep with nightmares
Memories breaking all asunder
I stood and endured.

When they
Forced my step towards Hell's gates
Fierce tongued with lies breaking the shell
There was the song my father sang
And I stood and endured.

Sunday, October 5, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: lies,love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prasetya Utama 15 October 2008

Tremendous poem. Beautiful!

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Ronell Warren Alman 15 October 2008

Great job Colin! This shows that a person can be successful if they stay persistent. Never give in and never give up!

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

bravo! ! .......great write........

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Fiona Davidson 05 October 2008

Beautiful Colin....one of many poems from you that capture the imagination....Thank you for sharing this with us.

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