When There Was Only Poem by jim hogg

When There Was Only



I took your picture long ago
On the west shore of loch Lomond
One summer's day beneath a tree
When you were only twenty three

Our mad march days have come and gone
we had our moments in the sun
when I was tied and you were free
Way back in nineteen eighty three

For love had rushed us like a storm
To that old Phil Collins love song
You had me running to the beat
Down Byers Road past Havelock street
I held your hand and watched your feet
And running never felt so sweet

You took me to the Hayburn Vaults
You had no time for finding fault
And when this world called out to you
You did just what you had to do

And you were gone by Christmas time
On a one way flight o'er Palestine
You left behind sweet memories
A tender place and precious dreams

For love had rushed us like a storm
To that old Phil Collins love song
You had me running to the beat
Down Byers Road past Havelock street
I held your hand and watched your feet
And running never felt so sweet

Yes I was yours from that first turn
On the dance floor up in Tyndrum
The West End still belongs to you
And Langlands Road's nostalgic too

I took your picture long ago
On the west shore of loch Lomond
One summer's day beneath a tree
When there was only you and me

19 04 09

Saturday, December 8, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A 25 mile sponsored walk thru' beautiful countryside on 25 03 83, starting from and finishing at Tyndrum, at the top of Loch Lomond.....led to many things.. she was a staff nurse at the SGH, about to embark on a career in midwifery. She was confident, bright, very articulate, and the most socially accomplished person I've ever known... she was also a tender romantic, loved to have fun, was completely without airs and graces, and was nobody's fool. I fell into ... the 'deep forbidden lake' and took a while to make it back to dry land.. her parting gift was the Penguin edition of Remembrance of Things Past.. Places: Byer's Road (walking or running!) and surrounding areas of the west end, Loch Lomond, Roukenglen Park, a flat in Langlands Road, another in John O Gaunt Rd, NUL, Tyndrum, and the M8 at over a hundred miles an hour in storm force winds, her at the wheel; music: Bowie's Lets Dance (if you say run, I'll run for you) , Phil Collins, you can't hurry love, Bat out of Hell album, and E John's I Guess That's Why They Call it The Blues (video machine in pub in Newcastle under Lyme)
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