When The Sun Sets Over The Ocean Poem by Mimie Durand

When The Sun Sets Over The Ocean

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When the sun sets over the ocean
when the moon begins to rest
she sits at the ocean’s beach
its red cloak disappears in the west.

Each evening she yearns for its beauty
the feeling cannot be surpassed
she wishes its elegance would prevail
but like a ship it lowers its mast.

Soon she’ll be as one with the sunset
the sickness has taken its toll
the thought of resting in its magnificence
lulls her heart and soul

Dedicated to Debbie Wherland

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 15 September 2016

Great poem with a touch of reality and true emotions, and reminiscences.

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Manonton Dalan 09 September 2008

rhyming soul kissing ocean beach soaking those four beautiful feet rest now the sun is down or have a nice maitai for a round thanks love your natures sprinkled poem. thanksmd

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Ency Bearis 09 September 2008

a nice dedication..maybe for your love one...simile/old age..great write... Ency Bearis

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