When The Sun Goes Down Poem by Liz Oates

When The Sun Goes Down

Rating: 5.0


Momma says God'll build us a house
and it'll be made of gold
and the windows'll be spun from diamonds
and its walls'll never fold.

It'll shine on a clear horizon-
the kinda place you'd think the sky's in
and we'll have pretty white curtains that let the sun through.
She says, 'Baby, I ain't cryin' and I don't want you to.'

Momma holds me close when the sun goes down
and talks 'bout our house like it's already done.
I've asked her if we can go stay there awhile
but she says the buildin' ain't even begun.

It'll shine on a clear horizon-
the kinda place you'd think the sky's in
and we'll have pretty white curtains to let the sun through.
She says, 'Baby, I ain't cryin' and I don't want you to.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 01 July 2011

Liz, this is an excellent, well penned and poignant write which shows me that you definitely have the talent to make through the poetry world in due time. I really enjoyed your work! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Brittany Meyne 24 July 2006

hey lizzie, that was a really good poem and i was in the hurricane katrina rita 2 so it meant alot when i read it

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Liz Oates

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