Humera Sultana

Rookie - 54 Points (Hyderabad, India.)

When The Heart Cries


When the heart cries
The eyes look on
It weeps and shrieks
And mourns and grieves
It whines and whimpers
And howls and bleats
It bellows and roars
And snivels and squalls
It sobs and wails
And leaves a trail
The eyes look on.

When the heart breaks
The eyes look on
It snaps and quivers
And shatters and severs
It crumples and collapses
And leaves a hiatus
It tears and slits
And rents and ruptures
It dribbles and drops
And bleeds and trickles
It drips and pools
And out of the eyes it ooze.
Humera Sultana

Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2014
Edited: Saturday, April 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: love hurts


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Comments about this poem (When The Heart Cries by Humera Sultana )

  • Rookie - 191 Points Niamat Ali Murtazai (10/12/2014 12:00:00 PM)

    The storm of passions is presented in an artistic way.The gleaning of words is proper and pleasing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,068 Points Chinedu Dike (9/10/2014 2:44:00 AM)

    A well articulated and beautifully penned. Oh yes! The Eye look on in sympathy because it sheds tears. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Bright Morn (4/21/2014 2:30:00 PM)

    very nice and descriptive and like all ur poems this one has an amazing flow keep penning and thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,205 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/19/2014 7:15:00 AM)

    A detailed description of the sufferings given here, when the heart cries and breaks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raweya M. (4/18/2014 8:03:00 AM)

    When the Heart Cries,
    you can never have enough to describe how it hurts.

    Your words are beads of pearl, elegant yet, sad.

    My dear poetess, I am waiting for the book :) (Report) Reply

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