When Sun Was Down Poem by robyn selters

When Sun Was Down



Repercussions of a path
Careless with our ways

Choices made
When sun was down
Rebound on later days

Aftermath of sorrow true
Will not our pain erase

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goran Gustafsson 06 March 2010

There will come a time to reap what you sow and there is always a flipside to everything under the sun.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 February 2010

'Choices made when sun was down rebound in later days' how true and tragic. My comment was posted twice in the last poem, thanks to PH. 10++++

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