When Someone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When Someone



Long I had stayed
To know the secrets in any way
As I tried for season
To know he reasons

It was before me
Still I failed to feel free
They came as per turn
I failed to feel and return

It was nature's turn
To remove my concern
I felt cold
But yes it was not told

I should have known
The autumn
Where leaves did fall
To respond call

Then comes rainfall
What a thrill with shower's fall
All heat to disappear
When someone comes near

Wednesday, September 3, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Haminia Haar Beautiful poem! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

could use some minor editing Jovita Bocook4 minutes ago Over all the feelings are there. I enjoyed it but it saddened me so my heart goes out to you for your pain. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Enigmatic Paul Richard Sully2 minutes ago Beautiful words though I am puzzled over the meaning.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Janete Souza, Manish Kumar and Maithili Roy like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Long I had stayed To know the secrets in any way As I tried for season To know he reasons

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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