When Sincerely Prayed Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When Sincerely Prayed



All kind of lovely expressions
Surface in beautiful relation
When it is cemented firmly
And accepted calmly

I read in old book
Where one lover took
Help of cloud
And conveyed his love very loud

So many metaphors
And loveable adores
All appeared to express isolation
It looked so natural for relation

It perfectly matches
For attention to catch
How lovely nights can be called so romantic!
When love is shrouded with so much love magic?

Love needs no medium
But simple mum
Telepathy works and message is conveyed
The message reaches its end when sincerely prayed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2015

Re: When sinncerely prayed (Score: 1) by sweetcandyass on Sunday, January 18,2015 (19: 55: 10) I love the gentle feel of this write. today by hasmukh amathalal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2015

Re: When sinncerely prayed (Score: 1) by mac on Sunday, January 18,2015 (16: 32: 02) enjoyed the read, and the message in the final stanza. mac today by hasmukh amathalal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 January 2015

Re: When sinncerely prayed (Score: 1) by induce on Sunday, January 18,2015 (00: 44: 56) Jadia, the placement of a book in your poem, does shed a view and makes the mind wonder...What more could there be...? keep penning, induce Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: When sinncerely prayed (Score: 1) by mac on Sunday, January 18,2015 (16: 32: 02) enjoyed the read, and the message in the final stanza. mac Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: When sinncerely prayed (Score: 1) by sweetcandyass on Sunday, January 18,2015 (19: 55: 10) I love the gentle feel of this write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2015

राजेश जायसवाल likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2015

All kind of lovely expressions Surface in beautiful relation When it is cemented firmly

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