When My Love States That She Is Futile... Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

When My Love States That She Is Futile...

Rating: 5.0


When my love states that she is futile,
She actually mends relations with eyes of stress,
For love's never dead though covers miles,
She is ever an angel with beauty; ageless,
Times when love meets fake eyes,
Really it seems genuine and so becomes,
Love's endowed with success, not lies,
With true soul's meetings in the life; wearisome,
Love not sprouts leaves of futility,
For impediments when approach, it'll be same,
Though shadow, the woes, like a foe with priority,
Yet, with legs of trust love shall never be lame.
Like as hummingbirds stop lips until they meet spring,
For success, ever love be hungry which faith brings.

Sunday, November 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 23 November 2014

Lovely poem. For 13 yr. old you are excellent in writing. My best wishes for you. Thanks for your comment on my recent poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 December 2014

Very beautiful poem and created with the feelings of pen thank you

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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

such a wonderful creation saheb....Love not sprouts leaves of futility, ...

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Valsa George 23 November 2014

' with legs of trust love shall never be lame' If there is mutual trust, love will not limp or be lame. Enjoyed your poem on love!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 November 2014

A beautiful and amazing expression of love and feelings.............10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 November 2014

Another great poem on feelings of love scripted with loving and wonderful lines......amazing write....10/10

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