When Life Gets So Hard Poem by rakesh rampariya

When Life Gets So Hard

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I wanted to find some words on a card.
That would help to get thru' it when life gets so hard.

It seems you can't bear it, perhaps can't go on
When deep in the heart there's no trace of a song.

Some words that would comfort when late in the night
The trials return and you're too tired to fight.

Or the tears flow so often it seems you'll run dry.
And life gets so tough that you just want to die.

Or at least go and hide where you're safe from all pain.
Someplace you can rest 'til you find joy again.

What are the words you so need to hear
That will help and will heal and remove all the fear?

That builds up inside 'til you think you'll explode
What are the words that will lighten the load?

If only I knew the right words to say.
To encourage and bless you or comfort some way.

I know not the words but this I can do.
I shall offer up prayers to the Father for you.


Sometimes, in life when you really need someone to comfort you because you're too confuse of something else but nobody is there... all you have to do is to PRAY.
Sometimes, when someone is there to comfort you- the more confuse you're are! ... all you have to do is to LISTEN to your heart!
Sometimes, going somewhere cannot help you to think... all you have to do is to FIND other ways and other things that you think it will help you go on.

So, no matter what happens in life always remember three things... PRAY, LISTEN and FIND! And HOPE and FAITH will follow! Have a good and happy life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahfooz Ali 26 December 2008

Just faith on allah.......... RAkesh............life will nva be so hard......... and one thing more.......... be strong......................u r ryt.... jus pray......... but being a male.......... pray will nva do gud.......... if will fold ur hands.......... and complacent......... Be bravo..........

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Jay P. Narain 26 December 2008

A very well written and meaningful poem. You are very blessed and hope you find the eternal peace.

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Merna Ibrahim 06 January 2009

fascinating! I like the rhyme and the title is great. I like this 2 lines 'what are the words you so need...' keep it up

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2009

You have a wonderful ear for scansion, Rakesh and heart as open as a mighty field. The couplet style words very well for this poem and I envy your theistic conclusion. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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*Trusting You* 29 December 2008

when I kicked down I kick back! good job. Becca

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 December 2008

When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 December 2008

When going gets tough, tough gets going........ Good work...........

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