When I Think Of You Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

When I Think Of You

Rating: 4.8


Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf

Everywhere white snow
My heart melts the grief

For weeks gray sky
My soul flies in blue

All of them do happen
When I think of you

(2008/10/21)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 22 October 2008

Brief, but beautiful. A fine lyric piece. l0 from me. Warm regards, Sandra

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M M 22 October 2008

A lovely poem in which the metaphor of automn brings a new sight of the self :) 10!

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Sarah Abdullah 22 October 2008

Everywhere white snow My heart burns the grief I just Love how your Images can be related to other things Sooo Easily good one

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Lindsey Ashton 22 October 2008

nice poem, nicley written

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Rosan Sadir 22 October 2008

It is a lovely insight of words and is pieced together beautifully

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Emma Adamyan 26 June 2009

wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 06 February 2009

wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem

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Shabre Moore 21 January 2009

that's jus totally beautiful i realy do like it

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Caroline Weeks 29 October 2008

So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.

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Pure Remedy 24 October 2008

AWW THAT IS TO SWEET! .. I LIKE

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