jenie hart


When I See Them Fly I Will Feel You Near


As I look outside I see the breeze
Caress the leaves from the trees
And carry them to all around
Gently laid upon the ground
I see the birds so high above
Their songs sing of our special love
And laid upon their soft sweet wing
Your love to me they gently bring
And as they start their graceful descent
Delivering a message that’s heaven sent
One thing I know and will hold so dear
When I see them fly I will feel you near

Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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Comments about this poem (When I See Them Fly I Will Feel You Near by jenie hart )

  • Bronze Star - 5,586 Points Bri Edwards (4/29/2014 12:22:00 PM)

    i sent this to MyPoemList. great fitting of words together with rhyming and reason.
    i especially enjoyed Caress the leaves from the trees. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,094 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/6/2013 6:09:00 PM)

    One thing I know and will hold so dear
    When I see them fly I will feel you near
    Beautiful!
    The breeze, the caressed leaves, the birds high above, their soft, swift wings, their graceful descent, songs of special love, heaven sent message and, the last but not the least, 'When I see them fly I will feel you near ' feeling have so nicely been crafted and depicted that one can almost 'touch and feel' these.
    A masterpiece! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (8/1/2013 2:23:00 PM)

    great write
    a heart sounding one (Report) Reply

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