malini kadir

Rookie - 44 Points (17th october / Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY)

#when I Need The Sense Of Belonging - Poem by malini kadir

When I need the sense of belonging
To help me cross the chasm
To fill energy into the dumb brain's
sleeping energies
The lightening blaze that sheers through.......
I build a tent
In the back of my brain
And crawl into it
Here I cover the antiques of past
Well brushed to its shine
For In it I see the face
Of the girl
I lost along the way
Up the winding path.....
I blush at my ignorance
I stammer as words rush
then on second thoughts
Fall silent...
As I continue to gaze the stars
Counting my blessings
one by one
Till a grateful heart
wakes up from its slumber
Lord;
Is it true?
Do you really exist?
If so; show me the winding path
That will prick my senses
Add the joyous smile
To your lips.......and I finally reach you......
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~m alinikadir


Comments about #when I Need The Sense Of Belonging by malini kadir

  • (12/30/2013 1:06:00 AM)


    When you need the sense of belonging write your poetry, it will guide you to it.
    Your inner child comes out in beautiful ways through writing. It dwells with God always.
    I wish you peace in your search. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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  • (5/29/2010 3:14:00 PM)


    That poem is very interesting to me. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/19/2010 2:44:00 AM)


    I build a tent
    In the back of my brain
    And crawl into it
    Here I cover the antiques of past
    Well brushed to its shine


    If so; show me the winding path
    That will prick my senses
    Add the joyous smile
    To your lips.......and I finally reach you......
    liked all these lines very much. search of the Divine in you. very nice. i too am on my search for the divine.. i shall not rest until i reach my goal.
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  • (7/1/2009 2:06:00 PM)


    when i need the sense of belonging, go home to yourself, for He dwells within you. get in touch with the child in you, when your instincts were sharp. Malini, you echo my thoughts and practice. yes, you will finally reach Him.

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    lovely poem, thoughts expressed with so much clarity

    Mamta
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 15, 2014


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