~~when I Love You~~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

~~when I Love You~~

Rating: 5.0


When i love you, my beloved~
...The earth will
...Stand still~
With no rotation upon it's Axis
...Until we have
...Our Fill~
Come gentle to me, my beloved~
...Embrace the
...Embers glow~
Hold me, as if, i am part of you
...As you and i
...Become one Soul~
Raise your sweet lips of surrender~
...Share that pearl
...Deep Inside~
Come to me, oh come to me, my beloved
...For tonight i am
...Your loving bride~
I am your ONLY lover, my sweet~
...And you are
...Only mine~
Remember that whenever i love you
...The World will
...Suspend in time~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 14 November 2007

Lynda, Thank you. That is a compliment. He writes so beautifully, but then the Brits seem to have this knack for writing beautifuly when it comes to matters of the heart. And you, also, have that knack, but then, you are from across the pond as well! Seems to me, i remember another poet on another site, with the same last name. I remember reading some of his beautiful work! I believe his name was Keith. And his work was far and above the best on the site. Thank you Lynda, Your words are very kind! Theo

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2007

Lovely words Theodora, you are the female version of Andrew Mark Wilkinson, well done, best wishes Lynda

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