When I Look At You Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

When I Look At You

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When I look at you
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When I look at you
I see in your face a sky
A sky where all dreams
Born and last perennial
Like tulips and daffodils
In Eden enshrining a heaven
When I look at you more
Searchingly, I stumble upon
Many a star twinkling in your eyes
Many a heart-shaped pendant
Dropping down from ears
Looking like pendant flowers
On frail stems waver
Through the breeze
Of your delicate turn
And many a cascade
Falling from your deep dark hair
And the nose holding the sun
And the brow the moon
And on your lips purple
The sweet firmament hangs on
Oh what a countenance or mien
You carry when I see
In you an infinite sky……

Saturday, July 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 28 July 2014

beautiful imagery................like it sir

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Valsa George 27 July 2014

You have described the paragon of a real beauty or a beauty at least in your eyes! Wonderful description! Many a heart-shaped pendant Dropping down from ears Looking like pendant flowers On frail stems waver Through the breeze Of your delicate turn Great image!

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Bursting with beauty my friend!

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2014

infinite sky in smile, I like it, thanks,

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