When I Let You In Poem by Life Poem
When I Let You In
When I Let You In,
I Loved You,
More Than The The Sun Loves The Moon.
When I Stayed With You,
I Gave To You,
My Hands For Comfort and Heart for Help.
When I Kissed You,
I Close My Eyes,
And Let My Foot Pop Up Like A Little Girl.
When I Protected You,
I Meant What I Said,
And Smiled When I Got Into the Mess.
When I Swayed With You,
My Eyes Stayed On You,
And counted the twinkle in your eyes.
When I was part' From You,
My Mind was on you,
and the memories we had.
When I Loved You,
I Let You In,
and you came.
When I Loved You More,
You stole from me,
And Left.
When I Watched You Leave,
I Broke,
The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.
Very heart felt and tru....if this happn to u guys patch things up....truly beautiful. DIMPLZ
Wow I'm touched by your comments. I won't patch things up btw, he's probably harassing some other poor girl now. And I really do mean what i right, that's the beauty! Yup, he stole some stuff from me. Thanks!
Thanks guys, I went for this sort of bizarre rhythm and all. But emotional as well. Thanks!
i let you in you lied and betyrad me.....................so i i did the same......awesome poem, my favorite part is when you wrote.....when i let you in, i loved you.more than the sun loves the moon, reallllyyyy goood toching love, annie
this is a good poem, but also a very good poem to read is 'Neil is awsome'
i really like this poem because i fully understand and feel it. its beautiful
When I Watched You Leave, I Broke, The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You. .......................the poetry lines still haunting my thoughts.... a poetry that catches the emotional you........Great job!
Poetry is about letting in. It is a poetry that deserves a credit and a crown. It is a 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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When I Watched You Leave, I Broke, The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.... it is so painful dear. very good write