When I Fly Poem by Tara Crown

When I Fly

Rating: 5.0


I'd rather not be
a balloon on a string,
bobbing and nodding
silent agreements with the wind,
helplessly tilting and
quietly straining
for blue sky that waits
endlessly

Nor would I be,
immobile and clumsy,
a rock tied to a parachute,
dumbly numbly
watching patched earth
swing and drift
upward to grab hold and
gobble

But a single feather to
sweep away smiling,
resilience floating,
riding on high currents
above what storms,
flying, unattached and
never touched by
rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 28 April 2006

Another terrific poem I had somehow missed! I love the balloon description of bobbing and nodding silent agreements with the wind. Wonderful. -chuck

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Linda Hepner 16 February 2006

Another great poem, Tara L

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

Great thought. I really liked it.

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Ndidi Ubogu 01 February 2006

When i was reading your poem, actually i felt i had wings, because i was flying with your words. Sweet poem and good use of English. keep it up my friend

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Elya Thorn 01 February 2006

This is an amazing poem, you've made me feel weightless... ~~Elya Thorn~~

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