When I Cry Poem by Seth Mutau

When I Cry

Rating: 5.0


When I cry, no one seems to hear me cry,
or is it just what I think?
When I cry tears don’t come from my eyes, but from my heart.
My tears sting and bring soo much pain to me,
but bring joy and happiness to others.

When I cry, I cry no one comforts me.
I’ve been crying ever since my heart started beating.
Who would comfort a crying heart for that long?
I guess the world is moving too fast to care for a crying heart.
Life its self is in a hurry to hear me cry.

When I cry, my heart draws the pain and sorrow inside of me.
Some just take a fresh breath in the wind to feel free and at peace,
my heart cries, who can do that for me?
Crying is all I do, crying is all my heart does.

When I cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sirkka Rikky Hedimbi 13 July 2013

Someday you'll find someone that will notice your tears and care enough to comfort you! and when that day comes, your heart will finally be at ease

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 May 2009

When I cry what happen? Many things happen without a sound within heaven and earth. Luminous piece, lovely.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

a truly brilliant poem..bravo my friend well done

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

perhaps you might be heard get noticed if you stop crying and start laughing...people are like that, Seth...these 'four people' we usually talk of...good piece on lamenting lines...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

I love the concluding line- 'crying is the only thing i can do to ease the pain and sorrow in side of me..who can do that 4 me? cry is all i do' And added 10.

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