When I Am Gone.. Poem by Meggie Gultiano

When I Am Gone..

Rating: 5.0


When i am gone, weep not my dear heart
For your weeping is only temporary here on earth
I will be your guiding star at night
That lights your way in the morning light.

Weep not...when i am gone..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 03 May 2009

Okies but don't go from ph otherwise we will weep.........lol.........just joking.: -) ..........good Write.........

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Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2009

stars...we wouldn't be weeping looking at them...a short write that imparts a lot of comfort and console on read...10

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Sandra Martyres 03 May 2009

A touching write Meggie....

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I now officially appoint you as my Guiding Star and Guardian Angel (if I am allowed two of you) . There is no hurry Meggie as we need you here for a long time yet! Just keep your poetry coming for us to love and enjoy. 10/10 Karin Anderson

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Naidz Ladia 04 May 2009

when i am gone i won't leave any questions unanswered when i am gone just don't forget our friendship dear...

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C. P. Sharma 16 May 2009

When i am gone, weep not my dear heart Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Outpouring of heart. You write like me. Please read and review my poem 'A wish'.

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Eddie Larkin 15 May 2009

Beautifully written short poem about what eventually happens to all of us, but as the old saying goes: 'I am not dead, I've just left the room' which complements perfectly what you are saying here, Meggie. May you not leave the room just yet! ! !

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a touching write.....

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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

emotional and beautiful, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 May 2009

It's but a moments parting... Andy 10

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