When Frustration Takes Over Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When Frustration Takes Over

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When frustration take position in driver’s sit,
Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit,
Peace and harmony are true essence and very fit,
Moral may lie very low when disturbances hit,

People may have distrust and look suspicious,
Earnest peace efforts may remain continuous,
When gravity of situation remain high and explosive,
Even mighty and might may not remain responsive,

Whole life time’s great work and achievement’s,
Will be on vane if not proper or no movements,
Slight error in judgment may turn events,
Solid material upon hit may find some dents,

Wrong notion and faulty planning,
Will be like railway crossing without manning,
You can’t hide face or runaway from the scene,
Your work may speak and deeds also seen,

Any mad man may come and fire point blank,
Never expose weakness but with the words thank,
You may not survive and meet death,
People may shed tears and offer wreath,

You may meet the challenge and go down,
Life may be lost and position without crown,
Name will be inscribed on marble plate,
Alas! That will last journey along with fate,

We have faced loss of lives with senior leaders,
High tributes paid and honoured by readers,
But who will come forward and strongly plead,
It will not be what you “did” but what were: “deeds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dalsukh S 20 July 2009

People may have distrust and look suspicious, but u loose sense when frusteration is there...10

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Pradip Pillai 20 July 2009

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, common sense disappear as soon as frysteration takes opvver...10

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Trevor William 20 July 2009

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, u loose concentration wwhen under pressure...10

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Chand Shikari 21 July 2009

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, common sense takes back seat...10

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Sejal Kapadia 24 July 2009

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, then common sense is taking back seat...10

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Chand Shikari 08 December 2009

When frustration take position in driver’s sit, Will not grant peace even thousands candles lit, Peace and harmony are true essence and very fit,

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Maegan Trafford 23 November 2009

Whole life time’s great work and achievement’s, Will be on vane if not proper or no movements, 10

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Saroj Davde 22 October 2009

People may have distrust and look suspicious, Earnest peace efforts may remain continuous, When gravity of situation remain high and explosive, Even mighty and might may not remain responsive,

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Suwarna Patil 02 September 2009

People may have distrust and look suspicious, Earnest peace efforts may remain continuous, ........10

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Rehana Nazli 11 August 2009

A good thematic poem, just check some grammatical mistakes.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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