When Destruction Comes Poem by Dave Alan Walker

When Destruction Comes

Rating: 4.5


Sleeping wide awake
waiting for what's to come

They will keep fighting
until destruction comes

They cry and they cry
into the morning sun

They don't realise
they are crying
for what they have become

Friday, May 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: drink
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some people will never change until they have destroyed everything around them. Drugs and alcohol are deadly in the wrong hands.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Poem with a great message. Very true said in few lines... They don't realise they are crying for what they have become They realise it too late. By the time destruction have already been done. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 June 2014

Self destruction is vicious indeed. The lurking danger is vividly presented. Thank you.

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Hans Vr 24 May 2014

So true dave. A nice and strong poem. I hope that many people will benefit from the very good message inside.

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