When All Words & Voices Fail Poem by Hugh Cobb

When All Words & Voices Fail

Rating: 4.7


In times of trouble, when all seems lost
& no good outcome can be found,
our beings are shaken, emotions tossed
& our own feet can't hold the ground,

when all words & voices fail
& nothing can be said or done,
we must surrender, not loose a hail
of curses, spew anger at the Sun

& Moon or all the planets & attendant Gods.
This process is always hard to do
but we must strive against all odds
for in reflection later we might rue

words uttered in futility & in haste:
our spirits wounded; our humanity laid waste.

(Copyright 4/3/2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 03 April 2006

God knows I've been shaking my fist at heaven but everyday become more defeated!

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***** ********* 03 April 2006

Hugh, this is sweet melodic work indeed. It has a lovely flow to it. I will take it to bed with me. 10 from sleep beckoning! Tai

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Anna Russell 17 April 2006

Great advice which will be all the more fondly taken to heart for the sweet harmony of this gorgeous little number. Hugs Anna xxx

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Gina Onyemaechi 09 April 2006

Now do you understand why I call you Guardian Angel Hugh? : -) Lovely rhyme, rhythm, and, of course, message. With warmth, Gina.

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Ernestine Northover 04 April 2006

Now this is a really nice poem Hugh, with a lot of good advice thrown in. The flow was really good too and I enjoyed reading it. Lovely words abound in it, and I loved the ending. Love Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 03 April 2006

Like the phrasing of this work, feet can't hold the ground, lots of despair. Well written.

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kskdnj sajn 03 April 2006

Very true Hugh, and enjoyed the rhythm is this poem. A good piece of wisdom. :)

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