! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What Went Wrong- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What Went Wrong- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.3


Preoccupied, took
The ingredients to bake;
Cake just didn’t rise…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 28 July 2009

It pays to have ones eyes on the workspace. 10 Bob

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a lovely senryu..on a practical situation...well written

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

like the idiomatic expression the cake was always dough...nice meaningful haiku!

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brief meaningful poem, , well done

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