What We Need.......We Give Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

What We Need.......We Give

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We need a heart to accept and a shoulder to shelter us
We need a real friend to bring back our lost life
We need to show love and affection even to a tough nut
We need to learn the values by touching the elders feet
We need to receive readily, even the small gifts given by kids
We need to say always...you made my day...to make it really
We need to be kind and humble....lead a simple life
We need to give up vengeance, as it docks our happiness
We need to say I love you as many times as it never hurts
We need to measure our words...It comes back at the same speed
We need to enjoy climbing the hill, rather touching the peak
We need to thank god that we didn't get everything.

Friday, July 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: need for human
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We should learn to give happily because it doubles our joy, I believe and follow it wholeheartedly.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 24 July 2016

Very good advive and nicely written. Thanks

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Pleasure is mine to read your dear comments after a long time, welcome bear poet thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 July 2016

The gist is we should try to stay happy always in life. Life is short and one should not waste time being sad and doing no good to others. Every moment should be used to do and think good for others. Nice drop! !

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Exactly you got it, life is simple we shouldn't complicate it love all live and let live thanks for the review dear poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2016

Yes! We need a real friend to bring back our lost life. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yes real friends who accept us as we are, thanks dear friend

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